Redo Self Portrait/Poster Design

So I began with redoing my self portrait, and I'm glad I did. You can see the new version serving as my profile picture here. It definitely turned out better the second time around, and slowly  but surely I'm starting to understand some fun little things watercolor can do.

Now for the poster design:

This would be for the International Film festival, though it isn't quite portraying the look I want, as Rusty said it looks like a "rotten orange with funny colors" and we don't want that, do we. We'll see